It didn't appeal to me.

While you used common used violence in hopes to get your score raised, there are other factors which may have helped people vote a little higher.

Your animation is not that bad. I'm sure if you keep improving, you will have some grand submissions in the future.

The 3D appearance of your backgrounds was poorly done. If you spent a bit more time on these, I'm sure it would definately have looked a whole lot better.

The same colours used between the backgrounds and foregrounds threw it all away. There should have been a difference between the two. You could barely see the weaponary.

Although you tried to reduce file size, the song you used was deteriated significantly. You could maybe have gone a few 100'kbs up for better audio.

Overall, really not my kind of work, nor is it front-page material. But I'm pretty sure that if you work at making flash, you'll see some great pieces in the near future.

Keep up the good work.

I like the way you add your own style to the characters.

The 'skits' were well thought of and incredibly funny.

A well deserved 5.

I look forward to any other future Sketches you decide to make.

I found your detail of colour in the previous two astounding.

Great to see you made such a long movie, but the way you presenting in Ep.1 and 2 is what made me like Claveman.

Anyways, still a good job. Can't wait to see 4 and 5.

Just plain bad..

You could of at least added a good reverb to the riffs.

This isn't a remix. It's shit just added on.

I like your stuff, but this is probably the worst I've heard.

At first, I thought this song was fucking awesome.

Long start, but I know that this genre takes a long time to build. And it was good for the wait. It kicked in nicely. Was truly awesome.

You had some good off-beat kicks and snares going, but then it screwed up. You brought in the constant running high-hats and killed it.

Apart from the disturbing, irritating hi-hats, it was fucking A.

I see this tune making it on commercial CDs. Just needs some refining.

I really like the way you start off with a simple riff and kick it in.

You tend to have too much of a build-up after that, if at all.

You should follow a beat structure of the common 4, 4, 4.. build-ups. You're aiming at a song that's meant to rock, so you should focus on stick to the music maths.

Not a great song in this current form, but would definately make a killer with a tiny bit of rework.

Good job.