Just plain bad..
You could of at least added a good reverb to the riffs.
This isn't a remix. It's shit just added on.
I like your stuff, but this is probably the worst I've heard.
erg, i asked newgrounds to delete a loit of my songs. this was an experiment ( a failed one i might add)
Started off really good, lost it in the hi-hats
At first, I thought this song was fucking awesome.
Long start, but I know that this genre takes a long time to build. And it was good for the wait. It kicked in nicely. Was truly awesome.
You had some good off-beat kicks and snares going, but then it screwed up. You brought in the constant running high-hats and killed it.
Apart from the disturbing, irritating hi-hats, it was fucking A.
I see this tune making it on commercial CDs. Just needs some refining.
A lot of distortion on the bass kick-in
I really like the way you start off with a simple riff and kick it in.
You tend to have too much of a build-up after that, if at all.
You should follow a beat structure of the common 4, 4, 4.. build-ups. You're aiming at a song that's meant to rock, so you should focus on stick to the music maths.
Not a great song in this current form, but would definately make a killer with a tiny bit of rework.
Sweet so far!
I really enjoyed this piece. Flowed like water, easy on the ears. The DnB loops/drums were great!
You definately have to finish this off with a phat bassline and some progressive dnb lines.
Well Done! I look forward to listening to your other submissions.
Thanks -Jun-! :)
This is going in my DNB collection!
Another DnB classic by you!!
I love the way you implemented the riff you had into the drum beat/bass line. Especially when it sounded similar to a 'didge'.
I really like this song! Well done!
Thank you very much mate, its nice to see this one getting some attention at last!
Very original! I really liked it towards the end.
The riffs and beats were fucking A!
At first you can't really hear the lyrics that well, but they clear up shortly. I like the flanger effect you gave.
I hope to see more rap-esque shit from you in the future!
Yeah the lyrics at the begining are ment to be a bit out of place, but when the main verses kick in i think i should change the effect, its a bit hard to know whats said unless u know the lyrics.. the last effect on the vocals, the flanger.. i also think really works, glad to see some one else agrees :)
I dunno how much more rap i'm gonna do, but who knows, maybe i'll do a kick flip in the limp dick olymics and get another one out :)
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