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Bad..

Just plain bad..

You could of at least added a good reverb to the riffs.

This isn't a remix. It's shit just added on.

I like your stuff, but this is probably the worst I've heard.

ehhhROFLCOPTER responds:

erg, i asked newgrounds to delete a loit of my songs. this was an experiment ( a failed one i might add)

Started off really good, lost it in the hi-hats

At first, I thought this song was fucking awesome.

Long start, but I know that this genre takes a long time to build. And it was good for the wait. It kicked in nicely. Was truly awesome.

You had some good off-beat kicks and snares going, but then it screwed up. You brought in the constant running high-hats and killed it.

Apart from the disturbing, irritating hi-hats, it was fucking A.

I see this tune making it on commercial CDs. Just needs some refining.

A lot of distortion on the bass kick-in

I really like the way you start off with a simple riff and kick it in.

You tend to have too much of a build-up after that, if at all.

You should follow a beat structure of the common 4, 4, 4.. build-ups. You're aiming at a song that's meant to rock, so you should focus on stick to the music maths.

Not a great song in this current form, but would definately make a killer with a tiny bit of rework.

Good job.

Sweet so far!

I really enjoyed this piece. Flowed like water, easy on the ears. The DnB loops/drums were great!

You definately have to finish this off with a phat bassline and some progressive dnb lines.

Well Done! I look forward to listening to your other submissions.

Jun

apimusic responds:

Thanks -Jun-! :)

-API-

This is going in my DNB collection!

Another DnB classic by you!!

I love the way you implemented the riff you had into the drum beat/bass line. Especially when it sounded similar to a 'didge'.

I really like this song! Well done!

WizardSleeve responds:

Thank you very much mate, its nice to see this one getting some attention at last!

Original piece!

Very original! I really liked it towards the end.

The riffs and beats were fucking A!

At first you can't really hear the lyrics that well, but they clear up shortly. I like the flanger effect you gave.

I hope to see more rap-esque shit from you in the future!

WizardSleeve responds:

Yeah the lyrics at the begining are ment to be a bit out of place, but when the main verses kick in i think i should change the effect, its a bit hard to know whats said unless u know the lyrics.. the last effect on the vocals, the flanger.. i also think really works, glad to see some one else agrees :)

I dunno how much more rap i'm gonna do, but who knows, maybe i'll do a kick flip in the limp dick olymics and get another one out :)

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