Score: 3

"Not my taste, but I see good work in the future."

submission: Black and Blue

date: February 11, 2005

It didn't appeal to me.

While you used common used violence in hopes to get your score raised, there are other factors which may have helped people vote a little higher.

Your animation is not that bad. I'm sure if you keep improving, you will have some grand submissions in the future.

The 3D appearance of your backgrounds was poorly done. If you spent a bit more time on these, I'm sure it would definately have looked a whole lot better.

The same colours used between the backgrounds and foregrounds threw it all away. There should have been a difference between the two. You could barely see the weaponary.

Although you tried to reduce file size, the song you used was deteriated significantly. You could maybe have gone a few 100'kbs up for better audio.

Overall, really not my kind of work, nor is it front-page material. But I'm pretty sure that if you work at making flash, you'll see some great pieces in the near future.

Keep up the good work.

Score: 9

"Loved it! Brilliant!"

submission: Shrek Sketches

date: January 18, 2005

I like the way you add your own style to the characters.

The 'skits' were well thought of and incredibly funny.

A well deserved 5.

I look forward to any other future Sketches you decide to make.

Score: 7

"I was disappointed."

submission: Claveman Ep. 3/5

date: December 26, 2004

I found your detail of colour in the previous two astounding.

Great to see you made such a long movie, but the way you presenting in Ep.1 and 2 is what made me like Claveman.

Anyways, still a good job. Can't wait to see 4 and 5.

Score: 8

"You, sir..."

submission: No Christmas For You!

date: December 26, 2004

are a genious!

Just as good as the rest, but not your best.

Points of view are absolutely f*k'in brilliant!

I hope you never stop making Foamy productions.

(10's in Violence and Interactivity as they don't play a part)

Score: 10

"Brackenwood is ingenious!"

submission: Prowlies at the River

date: December 15, 2004

Thank you, Adam, for bringing this world alive!

The world of Brackenworld is a master piece! I can't get enough, especially the special effects you've mastered. You, your work and your concept of the small, forest-filled planet has knocked me off my feet. I'm already starting to learn B525 (Adam Philip's musical language made for Brackenwood) so I can maybe catch any special features in the future.

Thanking for bringing this dream of yours to life! I've been waiting for something like this for a long, long time!

10/10!!!

(All you guys who have something bad to say about Brackenwood should maybe take a look at Adam Philips site and maybe you might see the bigger picture... this man and his work is #1!!!)

Score: 9

"Original work... something different"

submission: Lone Faction

date: December 14, 2004

Wow! Great game!

Given a proper coding language, a team of developers and some good dedication, this would of made a great PC game.

Good to see something entirely different! The addition of rotation 'weapons' added a great complexity to how the game is played.

Not my kind of game, but I really enjoyed.

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Not complaints, but 2 cents:
If you maybe had a smoother transition/interface between the game, it would seem more 'complete'.

The menu is also a bit dark in overall look... get it to look like a game you would normally buy and you will have a winner!

Keep up the good work! Cheers.

Score: 7

"Skating was very good!"

submission: deletepa01

date: October 28, 2004

Pretty good!

Lol! I've got the video clips of the Mercedes klapping that bunny in it's moer.

And that guy getting his ass kicked down those stairs...

but none the less, you're very good and should work on something big!

Cheers

Score: 5

"Couple of problems"

submission: Über Battle!

date: October 17, 2004

There are a few bugs you are going to get rid off... mainly if the enemy level is null.

The game overall was nicely organised, except for the two 'banners'.

Score: 8

"Time to take a step forward"

submission: shFIFTY FIVE!

date: October 2, 2004

You should really start on working to go more pro. No more screwing around!

You have talent and it's about time you stop working on NG entertainment and start working on a serious band!

The songs you have come up with may have lame content when comparing to box charts, but they are damn straight original and you yourself know: It's time to go bigger!

I'm not saying you'll be walking in Oasis' footsteps, but I believe you'll rip out a rockin' album if you dedicated and willed yourself to it.

Keep it real... I hope you take in some content and start working on something big!

Score: 7

"Not bad!"

submission: Moose Jam #3 - Stairway

date: September 8, 2004

Definately something to watch at least once. The time that went into this must have been quite a bit over average... it's something else to watch the simple circles and lines transform into figures.

Apart from that, the backgrounds for transformations are really plain: I understand that for the impact of this kind of flash, you need a bland background, but a slight gradient would really getting this looking more pro.

Overall, good job!
Sorry for your friend, livecorpse.