Jun's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Black and Blue]

Not my taste, but I see good work in the future.

It didn't appeal to me.

While you used common used violence in hopes to get your score raised, there are other factors which may have helped people vote a little higher.

Your animation is not that bad. I'm sure if you keep improving, you will have some grand submissions in the future.

The 3D appearance of your backgrounds was poorly done. If you spent a bit more time on these, I'm sure it would definately have looked a whole lot better.

The same colours used between the backgrounds and foregrounds threw it all away. There should have been a difference between the two. You could barely see the weaponary.

Although you tried to reduce file size, the song you used was deteriated significantly. You could maybe have gone a few 100'kbs up for better audio.

Overall, really not my kind of work, nor is it front-page material. But I'm pretty sure that if you work at making flash, you'll see some great pieces in the near future.

Keep up the good work.

Jesse-Ray responds:

okie dokie, will do

[Claveman Ep. 3/5]

I was disappointed.

I found your detail of colour in the previous two astounding.

Great to see you made such a long movie, but the way you presenting in Ep.1 and 2 is what made me like Claveman.

Anyways, still a good job. Can't wait to see 4 and 5.

[Prowlies at the River]

Brackenwood is ingenious!

Thank you, Adam, for bringing this world alive!

The world of Brackenworld is a master piece! I can't get enough, especially the special effects you've mastered. You, your work and your concept of the small, forest-filled planet has knocked me off my feet. I'm already starting to learn B525 (Adam Philip's musical language made for Brackenwood) so I can maybe catch any special features in the future.

Thanking for bringing this dream of yours to life! I've been waiting for something like this for a long, long time!

10/10!!!

(All you guys who have something bad to say about Brackenwood should maybe take a look at Adam Philips site and maybe you might see the bigger picture... this man and his work is #1!!!)

[shFIFTY FIVE!]

Time to take a step forward

You should really start on working to go more pro. No more screwing around!

You have talent and it's about time you stop working on NG entertainment and start working on a serious band!

The songs you have come up with may have lame content when comparing to box charts, but they are damn straight original and you yourself know: It's time to go bigger!

I'm not saying you'll be walking in Oasis' footsteps, but I believe you'll rip out a rockin' album if you dedicated and willed yourself to it.

Keep it real... I hope you take in some content and start working on something big!

[XIN Session 11]

Got some potential with a little more effort

It started off looking okay, but the drawings went down-hill after that. I think if you spent more time putting eye-candy into it, you would of definately come out with something good.

Dialogue speech would get it looking more like Hollywood and additional SFX's will get the viewers emotions more stirred (I like the 'maths-problem' effect! ^^).
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Apart from that, and why I rated so low: It really REALLY looks like a Naruto copy/spoof.

Putting aside everything else, good job! Art takes practice and I'm sure in a year, there'll be rockin' .swf put out by you guys!