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Not my taste, but I see good work in the future.

It didn't appeal to me.

While you used common used violence in hopes to get your score raised, there are other factors which may have helped people vote a little higher.

Your animation is not that bad. I'm sure if you keep improving, you will have some grand submissions in the future.

The 3D appearance of your backgrounds was poorly done. If you spent a bit more time on these, I'm sure it would definately have looked a whole lot better.

The same colours used between the backgrounds and foregrounds threw it all away. There should have been a difference between the two. You could barely see the weaponary.

Although you tried to reduce file size, the song you used was deteriated significantly. You could maybe have gone a few 100'kbs up for better audio.

Overall, really not my kind of work, nor is it front-page material. But I'm pretty sure that if you work at making flash, you'll see some great pieces in the near future.

Keep up the good work.

Jesse-Ray responds:

okie dokie, will do

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